Monday, July 12, 2004

LOVE'S DEATH

 

 

 

 

my nights once were filled with joy,

for love was mine to hold.

now loneliness seeks to destroy

and turn my heart ice cold.

 

so special was the love we shared, 

we would meet, though miles apart.

in the shadows our souls were bared,

where now lies my wounded heart.

 

does love die when things go wrong,

or does it just lie still?

and where is the cherished song

of the bird upon my windowsill?

 

no more will i see the sun,

no more a full moon view.

no more will i to the shadows run

nor will i taste the morning dew.

 

6 comments:

  1. Bittersweet ~ just like I like my chocolate ~ XXllnt!  BB, Me

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  2. Wow...I related and now i want to cry. *sigh* it's beautiful, your poem..and i think the love stays still.

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  3. Hope you are feeling less heavy hearted my Sweet Friend

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  4. This is a beautiful poem.

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  5. This is beautiful...just went through most of it.  The entry about the 83 year old woman...very nice.

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  6. I NOTICED THAT IN THIS POEM AT THE END WAS NO PICTURE OR POST SCRIPT WHO TO. AMAZING I WISH I COULD CUT AND PASTE THAT LETTER U SENT ME INTO IT SEE WHAT U SAID TO ME. HM I AM HURTING AND ADMIT IT BUT WHO DID U REALLY WRITE IT TOO. IF IT WAS ONE MAN WHO WRITES U YET IN UR FORUM SAY IT. IF NOT  SAY IT WHO IS MICHAEL A NEW FRIEND ..  THE SAINT WHOM.  U ARE SENDING ME MIXED SIGNALS AND I AM TO BLIND TO FOLLOW   I READ EACH ENTERY I DONT APPEAR YET I WAS UR WORLD AT ONE TIME. I DONT UNDERSTAND AT ALL. I DONT EVEN SAY I AM NOW. I GET THIS FEELING U MOVED ON AND I DIDNT GET OFFERED TO COME ALONG. WELL TELL A MAN WHERE HE IS IN UR LIFE. IF U ARE DONE SAY IT. IF NOT I WILL REMAIN AND PRAY FOR U. I AM BOLD ENOUGH TO WRITE HOW I FEEL HERE I ALWAYS WAS.  BUT IF I AM NOT GOOD ENOUGH HAVE THE DECENCY TO SAY IT
    AARON. THE MAN WHO WAITED TWO YEARS. AND IS NOW SITTING SURROUNDED BY  ??????????????????/ S

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